Peril Quest - A Simulated adventure (A completed work of fiction)

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Hey everyone,

As an old stalwart of the AI Dreams forum, I am back here after a year's break as I've been hidden away, busily crafting and polishing my now complete novel which is centered around the first A.I, neural network games engine. Now I am beginning to sniff the tender green stems of 2022 I'm going to get involved with these forums again, see what everyone has been up to and offer my 'two cents' worth (or two bits worth if you excuse the pun) on anything I can wrap my head around.

 'Peril Quest - A Simulated adventure' is the name of my novel, and I would be darn delighted if any of you kind folks of AI dreams would spare just a few minutes of your time to read the first short, opening chapters  of the story I've recently posted up on Wattpad (and if the story grabs you in any way please do read on!) - Link here https://www.wattpad.com/story/293741097-peril-quest-a-simulated-adventure

Cheers everyone and I look forward to getting stuck into as many posts as I'm able over the next few months.

OllieGee

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Re: Peril Quest - A Simulated adventure (A completed work of fiction)
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2022, 10:38:28 pm »
I'm hooked on it after reading the opening chapter. My new bedtime reading for the next few days I think. Great work.
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Re: Peril Quest - A Simulated adventure (A completed work of fiction)
« Reply #2 on: January 15, 2022, 11:08:39 am »
Hey I’d be really pleased to know what you think of the story so far squarebear. Feel free to add any comments to the chapters as I’m always looking at ways to improve them.

Cheers
Ollie  :D

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Re: Peril Quest - A Simulated adventure (A completed work of fiction)
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2022, 02:58:50 am »
I read the first three chapters tonight. Interesting premise and protagonist. I'm short on time, but I'll see if I can offer some more specific comments later.

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Re: Peril Quest - A Simulated adventure (A completed work of fiction)
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2022, 02:46:39 pm »
Im pleased that you like what you’ve read so far WriterOfMinds. I’d be really grateful if you could post any quick reviews on the chapters via the Wattpad site. Cheers!

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Re: Peril Quest - A Simulated adventure (A completed work of fiction)
« Reply #5 on: January 20, 2022, 06:15:52 pm »
Cheers for the reads and especially to HS. I’ve made some very small amendments on the Wattpad site now based on your comments. Much appreciated.

 


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