AI Winter at Castle Peaks - A Role-Playing fiction story - Help/Advice wanted

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OllieGee

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Hey all,

The 4th chapter of A.I Winter at Castle Peaks has now been published and can be found here: https://my.w.tt/eW7uHYNZ54

Thanks everyone for all your comments - You’ve really helped me bring this together and hone my writing craft...

Enjoy and as always, I’d be delighted to hear your comments.

Cheers

Ollie

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It's coming along quite nicely, Ollie! Good work! O0
In the world of AI, it's the thought that counts!

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Hello everyone

Part 5 of the story has been published on Wattpad and can be read here: https://my.w.tt/xfD18xXIk5

Cheers all

Ollie
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Hey all
Can I ask for anyone's favorite (non computer) game they like to play with friends as I may include this in a future chapter
Cheers
Ollie

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Trivial pursuit and Monopoly, to name a couple.
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I like Bierki because its both mental and physical. Or jenga, stuff along those lines.

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For anyone following this story, two new chapters have been uploaded to Wattpad today and the same every Sunday/Monday.

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I haven't had the chance to catch up with your story yet, but I just wanted to say that it's nice to see you share it here, it all adds to the variety of the site so thank you :)

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OllieGee

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I haven't had the chance to catch up with your story yet, but I just wanted to say that it's nice to see you share it here, it all adds to the variety of the site so thank you :)

Thank you Freddy
I’ve enjoyed sharing it here, it’s nice to know people are enjoying it and for me, I’m also getting some different A.I perspectives from the users of this group that I hadn’t thought of!
I’d be delighted if you could add any comments you have to the story once you have read it on the WattPad site so I can take these into account for further chapters. Cheers!

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I've rewritten the chapters now from the perspective of the players apartments as this gives a more dynamic and personal feel to the story.
Two further chapters coming this week. https://my.w.tt/zxHPTIo8q6

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For those that are interested new chapters 16 & 17 have been uploaded to Wattpad

https://my.w.tt/BQ3xSN2NX6
https://my.w.tt/Fl8Cf5FNX6
Cheers

Ollie

 


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